Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 26 May 2021
🌈 Imagery,Rhyme and Alliteration💕
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Hi Aisling, My name is Paityn and I am a student at NBC
ReplyDeleteI love all the Pink you added it is very bright I think It is really cool
It kind of reminds me of a riddle
Maybe you could add different colours in there too
Which one did you like to do the most?
thanks
Deletemaybe you could add from Paityn at the end
like this?
from Aisling