Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 6 August 2020
Not All Children Should Have Pets
WALT: write a persuasive
It is stupendously outrageous that all children need pets
this because they are amusing and easy to wind up also
need allot of attention all of the time.
Firstly they are vicious, expensive and may lead
to attacking and that can be very bad.
Secondly some pets are very easy to wind
up like dogs and goats.
Thirdly allergies sometimes kids have allergies like
someone mite be wheeze around dogs or cats
or any other animals.
In conclusion I don´t think that not all children
should have pets.
ps I´m not saying this to be mean.
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A very persuasive argument Aisling. I particularly like the words that you used in your introduction!
ReplyDeleteDo not worry, persuasive arguments are always to give someone an idea of how you're feeling, not to be mean.
Miss Pownall.