Thursday, 6 August 2020

Not All Children Should Have Pets


WALT: write a persuasive

It is stupendously outrageous that all children need pets
this because they are amusing and easy to wind up also
need allot of attention all of the time.

Firstly they are vicious, expensive and may lead 
to attacking and that can be very bad.

Secondly some pets are very easy to wind
up like dogs and goats.

Thirdly allergies sometimes kids have allergies like 
someone mite  be  wheeze around dogs or cats 
or any other animals.

In conclusion I don´t think that not all children 
should have pets.

ps I´m not saying this to be mean.

1 comment:

  1. A very persuasive argument Aisling. I particularly like the words that you used in your introduction!
    Do not worry, persuasive arguments are always to give someone an idea of how you're feeling, not to be mean.
    Miss Pownall.

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