Thursday, 14 May 2020

red riding hood remix



WALT: use  descriptive words in our writing 
why don't you have a try describing the characters in the video?

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3 comments:

  1. Mrs Judkins15 May 2020 at 12:20

    You have done some great descriptive writing Aisling. I love the line "snowy white hair". Just think about the colour font you use for your background as the white was quite hard to read. Did you enjoy the story?

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  2. Grandad15 May 2020 at 14:15

    Aisling I was very impressed with your comments especially "glowing red ruby eyes.Dark like a spiritual nightmare". This is an incredible description as it accurately describes the image portrayed.

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  3. Anonymous20 May 2020 at 09:37

    thanks grandad

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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
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