W.A.L.T Write a persuasive letter - Letter Template
This is my letter about why we should not have a dog in the class
Aisling, Miss pownall,
Room 2, Room 2,
100 lonsdale st, 100 lonsdale st,
NBC. Room 2
Monday 31 August.
Dear Miss Pownall
I strongly suggest a dog in the class is not the smartest of all Ideas for a reward
Because some students may hog the dog,they might get distracted from their
School work, and above all it will get very noisy in the class.
The dog is distracted
First when a student wants Charlie to do something Charlie might get distracted by another student who may be hogging the dog.
Distraction
Secondly Students that love dogs will be guaranteed to get distracted from their work it has happened to me when Mr Gray brought his dog Meg to school for two days Me and two of my friends got distracted from making a stop motion.
Aisling age 10
The dog is distracted
First when a student wants Charlie to do something Charlie might get distracted by another student who may be hogging the dog.
Still I strongly suggest a dog in the class is not the smartest of all Ideas for a reward Because can students hog the dog, they might get distracted from their School work and last but not least the noise level increases.
Yours truly Aisling
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