Friday, 27 March 2020

The Old Orphanage

The Old Orphanage


There once stood an orphanage  called Buttermilk Valley orphanage with a beautiful garden.
The many children would sing, dance and play all day long.  Their meals were delicious,
you could have one mouthful and taste such a sensation, you would think that your family
fish finger meals were plain .After all, they  were a rich orphanage. But one night a tragic
event happened, wolves attacked. The wolves  appeared up in their intriguing entry formation.
The orphans and carers evacuated when the wolves started to attack. The wolves tour down
the orphanage piece by piece till there was nothing left except  for an empty building. That
soon took part in an extraordinary part of history.  

By Aisling Andrews

1 comment:

  1. Excellent writing Aisling, you have left the reader wanting more! I wonder what kind of delicious food the served before the wolves attacked?

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