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Friday, 27 March 2020
The Old Orphanage
The Old Orphanage
There once stood an orphanage called Buttermilk Valley orphanage with a beautiful garden.
The many children would sing, dance and play all day long. Their meals were delicious,
you could have one mouthful and taste such a sensation, you would think that your family
fish finger meals were plain .After all, they were a rich orphanage. But one night a tragic
event happened, wolves attacked. The wolves appeared up in their intriguing entry formation.
The orphans and carers evacuated when the wolves started to attack. The wolves tour down
the orphanage piece by piece till there was nothing left except for an empty building. That
soon took part in an extraordinary part of history.
The many children would sing, dance and play all day long. Their meals were delicious,
you could have one mouthful and taste such a sensation, you would think that your family
fish finger meals were plain .After all, they were a rich orphanage. But one night a tragic
event happened, wolves attacked. The wolves appeared up in their intriguing entry formation.
The orphans and carers evacuated when the wolves started to attack. The wolves tour down
the orphanage piece by piece till there was nothing left except for an empty building. That
soon took part in an extraordinary part of history.
By Aisling Andrews
Thursday, 26 March 2020
bee Queen
A young woman of probable 15 walked into a dark deserted Forest. As she walked
deeper and deeper she heard growls from behind her from five hungry wolves. She ran and ran her heart out. She stopped at a tree and she started to climb and climb like her life depended on it.
To her surprise she saw the ending of the forest was just some trees away. when the wolves ran they spotted a sweet delightful morsel and went off.she jumped down from the tree and walked towards the end of the forest . Then she found a cave lit up with crystals. She stood at the entrance .On a small table was a cage with a honey bee as big as her head. The young woman walks into the cave and opens the cage to let the innocent honey bee out. In that moment the young woman, out of all of the other humans in the whole world, became the bee Queen.
By Aisling Andrews
Friday, 20 March 2020
LIVING SPRINGS CAMP
On the first day Paityn and I ran down a hill, we went behind a large bush and we just discovered the campfire pit. We wondered if we were going to have a campfire, so we ran all the way uphill. We ran to the kitchen\dining room and asked Mr Gray if we were going to have a campfire but he said no because there is a fire ban. When everyone else found out about the campfire pit Paityn and I told them we wouldn’t.
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